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Your Smile

There are smiles that lite up the night
Smiles that melt a heart
There are smiles that feel like a summer breeze
Yours sticks like a dart

It calms and soothes my weary heart
Turns my frown into grin
And in my memories it will live
To lose it, would be a sin

So spread your joy throughout the world
We all need what you bring
A magical wonderful glowing smile
That makes us want to sing


By Charlie Eldridge AKA American in Iraq

Author notes

My prayers are with you Blushfulmoon(Susan). You have truely brought a smile to my face.
Written May 4th, 2006

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  • tempestaira
    May 6, 2006
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    This was a very sweet poem. Your rhyming is so good. It seems like you are one of the most sincerest men about someone's smile. Good luck to you in the contest as well. TempestAira


  • DistilledGin
    May 5, 2006
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    This is great...I love it AmericaninIraq....Great job!!!


  • wishintreeUK
    May 4, 2006
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    You have penned a beautiful, refreshing poem for Susan, having captured her qualities so well, she is sure to love this.

    ~Katie~