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Blue Fungus (Blue Ribbon Award)

I am the Blue Fungus,
Who is lurking amung us.

So to all the poets,
Who think they know it.

The Fungus is here,
To set your words to fear.

I have a lot of poems to read,
So you better take heed.

Who will be the first,
To quench my thirst?

I have a lot of words to say
And
You'll be waiting for that day!

I am the Blue Fungus
Who's all amung us!

Author notes

Beware of developing a Fungus!
Written May 3rd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Alexandra Saint
    May 22, 2006
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    B

    I don't want to hit you with anything;
    I think your poem is really amusing.
    You are great with rhymes and rhythms
    And with lots of metaphor-isms.
    It seems to make not that much sense
    But it could be you! You seem pretty dense
    (In mind, not in lack of brainpower,
    For you seem quite keen on fungi and power.)
    I really like the lines that say
    A message funnier by the day:
    The one that says, "The Fungus is here,"
    And also, "To set your words to fear."
    So Kudos to you and good luck in the contest.
    Much lofe, your friend Bekca, the bestest.
    ^^

  • BlueFungisAmungUs
    May 14, 2006
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    Ohhhh!!! So you want to whip me with a stick, how inviting! It’s a shame that you need to wear a wig, but they say a bald headed women will never leave you.


  • comeflyaway
    May 13, 2006
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    "delirious"....too much fungis

    I'm sick of this fungis,
    Living amung us.

    Someone oughta hit him with a stick,
    And do it quick!

    I can't believe my eyes,
    because he's spreading lies!

    I flipped my wig,
    When I read the comments from this pig.

  • BlueFungisAmungUs
    May 10, 2006
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    I came here because someone I know is a poet on this site. I just wanted to fungus them and make them wonder who it could be. I wanted to appear to be a critic with attitude but have fun doing it. I don't mean to insult anyone just trying to get a few laughs. Thanks for your comment.


  • Oleander
    May 9, 2006
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    humorous and random

    my first thought was "where'd that come from?" this is really funny. But it makes no sense at all to me...if you'd explain it that would be great. I'm sure you'll have a lot of readers now fungus. lol
    thanks for entering- that was great. lmao

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