People think life is a wonderful gift,
But they dont even notice the little shifts.
Like when you're mad how you double your fist,
Instead of being happy and getting a kiss.
You hear a bell,
And you think you're in hell.
Then you wake,
And realize it was all fake.
You try to wonder where you were,
But it is just one big blur.
You look beside you and see,
The one that is meant to be.
And you know she will be there to cheer you up!!
Author notes
at first when i was writing this is i was really mad at my mom then i started to remember all the people who were there for me especially one of my best friends...i know this poem isnt good but thats ok i would like your honest opinion about it even if it is good or bad. please and thank you
Written May 3rd, 2006
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hmm a comment on this is hard O.o but b/c i love ya lol. amber nice and i dont say that just b/c i love ya
so later and good job
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Thanks hollie>
< take care k and if u need anything remember that im here for you also!!Bye Bye
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Lov eya!
Hey butthead! This was not retarted! It was really good. It is about your mom? I was kinda thinking about Enke. This is a good poem, it has a lot of emotion it. I am sorry that things have not been good for you lately. I really wish that I could do something. I try to make you smile by being an idiot!
You are a wonderful person and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. I am always here for you -k- ALWAYS!!!! Imma miss you amber! BEST FRIENDS FOREVER!!! 
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