The Lonely Cold
I see it in you
The pain and hurt
From ones who twist things
From loves instruments that were defaced
My soul's eyes
See your struggle
The search looking
Unworthiness you see, and cold days departed
Looking for love
You already have
The tendrils of sound.
O solemn-beating heart
Inside of you
I ask look inward
See the love you have
I strive for and love
You
Stars that meets our hands, and shade by our hands,
O my childish time; some have me out in that time
The dancing, shouting, gleeful
Where is her love, send it from rose
Buried
But still alive
Grew gentler till myself so,
Beloved I am still here
Bards have to be there rehearsed
With lines they sing to you
A tangle of looks from their eyes
The same morning gray
Look at This love and you'll understand
Why I am still here
For the sins of thought we had
Are gone
Forgiven
Love remains for the calm day
When a heavy soul bears you down
Then, love I struggle against the lonely cold
While music left in long ago
Still rings in our heart
Which is too ready with her from above
Us bounded by our broken star
Pour out the losing and pain
Return to our star
Steven Mels
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Written May 3rd, 2006
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A sorcerers poem of love
A superb mystery poem of love, deep and full of trials,
metaphoric and imagery of the old poets here; the texture of it
was gothic and created an essence of a magic enchantation.
I could see a staircase to some strangest of love .
Unique in all its content ..loved this voyage into strangelove.
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umm...wow, this poem was just so totally intense. emotion and feeling was packed into every letter and word, not a breath or stroke of the pen was wasted. there is just so much there, i had to read a few times. it's BEAUTIFUL! i love everything about it.
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dreamer thank you . i am glad you enjoyed this write.
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Wow, Steven......my god I love this poem words are not good enough to express what this poem brought to me. It's so powerful and so great even words can't describle or I haven't think of any yet. But I have to tell you that is a beautiful write. I sure that is most wonderful poem I have read today. Powerful indeed.
Wish you the best
Snow
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wow, this is a great poem i mean you did a good job on this, you have a great pen there my friend, keep it flowing
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A great piece on love dear friend.
Don't know, but some people don't know the meaning of love at all. They can't love and don't like to be loved. That's sad.
Wish you wonderful days.
Shahrzad
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deep and powerful poetry here this is so well written and tugs on the heartseleve just a all around great poem...
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a beautiful poem,beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed it
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well done
Very powerful and moving write, you did a great job with t he flow of this one. Please keep penning and sharing your talents.
God bless
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angel thank you for the read and the comment. i am glad to share this with you and everyone. thanks again
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this was so pretty, Your words are just so powerful, and very enjoyable to read, thanks for sharing and keep up the awesome poetry here...
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mom thank you much for your reading and always being here for me and others. your love shine through like a becon of light. and also for the support of my simple words. thank you mom. i love you.
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EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!
Steven:
If this isn't love, then hell I do not know what it is!!!!! This is a clear depiction of it and it shows clearly!
The emotions and the hope and the love, are "ALL" there.....
Once again you have given this reader not just "goose-bumps" but a few tears come to eye.....
Once again I need to tell you that you are an awesome writer that knows what he is feeling and how to put it down in words.....
I am very proud of you as a poet, as a writer and as a son.....
keep up the good work, you should know by now that you certainly do this very well.....
Be blessed with love and light, and the guidance of our Lord.....
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with me....
With love, hugs, and smoches,
MoM
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Blazing thank you for the read and the comment. i belive we are all at one time or another going or have gone through this.
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nice write steven this sounds familar like a story I am currently living I babble well done with this one
love and light
blaze
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