How do i explain how i feel,
I'm so lonely inside,
and why so i feel this way,
i really don't understand,
whats gotten into me,
i never have these feelings,
i have never lost sleep,
i have never cried tears,
over any kind of guy,
so why do i cry now,
why do i wish for you,
and why cant i just move on,
i am wasting my time,
because you don't even care,
why are you so different,
ans why do i still love you,
i truly don't understand,
why cant i just forget you,
it used to be so easy,
how come with you its so hard,
i hear your voice and scream,
i care so much for you
and i never know why,
i have three major questions,
Will i ever let go,
Will I ever stop the tears,
and will i get to sleep,
i only have three questions,
just three little questions.
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Written May 3rd, 2006
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This is a good write. I've only been in love for about 2 months, but this is what I do know. No guy who breaks up with a girl is worth the time of day. You shoudln't spend time wondering if he'll ever let you move on or anything like that. Something llike this happened to one of my friends. And finally after getting a new boyfriend, she was able to move on and let everything go. She became so happy, like a whole new person, and wasn't depressed. What I'm trying to say, is to forget this guy that broke your heart. Nothing good will come of moping around and thinking about him. In the end, everything will be okay. Well anyways...this is a great poem. I like it. Keep up the great writing. May God bless you and help you to get over this guy!!!!!!!!
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The answer to all three of your questions is YES! And they're not little questions, I bet most of the worlds population has asked these questions at least once in there lives. It really hurts though and that pain is horrible. You don't know where you are from one moment to the next. But it does get easier with time, honestly, it does. My daughter is nearly 14 and has gone through the same. Her name on AP is Pebbles, you can read some of her poetry if you like. I saw that you applauded Come Back To Me and I wanted to return the sentiment. Thank you for that and thank you for sharing your feelings here with us. It's really important to keep talking or writing about how you feel. Never bottle it up and seek out people who have experienced what you have been through. We understand more than anyone. God Bless you Dark-Lady and take care. Six of One. XXXXX.
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you'll feel better but never forget. i loved the poem it was amazing!!!!!!!!
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There is an old story about a man who falls into an open manhole and becomes trapped. People pass by and he yells for help, a doctor passes by and tosses a perscription to him, a priest passes by and writes him a prayer, finally another man passes by and jumps into the hole with him. The man asks why he jumped in instead of going to get help. The man says to him "Because I have been in this hole before, and I know a way out".
Pain and suffering are like being in that hole, you'll get out. When you do you will become a better and stronger person for it. You'll be able to use that knowledge and experience of pain to relate to others.
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i understand
know the feeling all too well nice peice -
VERY GOOD! I know how it feels and trust me it will be hard but with faith and patience u can do it!!! I am splitting up with my husband and its killing me but ill live! Just trust GOD!!!
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Very Good
Beautiful, I really liked this. It reminds me of how I feel, I can really relate. I actually thought I was over this one guy, but I still love him. I was angry at him for being kinda... I don't know. A little rude, kinda mean, and I just saw him as a jerk. But he stopped, and... oh, I don't know. We almost got together, but my "best friend" suddenly fell for him again, and she told him, and his old feelings for her kinda came back, and now they kinda like each other, but he's not sure 'cause he still likes me a bit, and I can't even explain to him how much I love him, and I have no clue why I'm telling you this, you poem just reminded me of my situation. Sorry for going on like this. I love your poem, it really shows your emotions.
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very, VERY nice...i loved this poem cuz i can relate to it sooo well. I'm sorry you must love him though he does not feel the same towards you, been there done that with my best friend...she does the same to me and she don't even seem to know it...great write. yea, work on the grammar a bit though cuz it seemed just a little bit choppy in some places but other than that it was awesome....great job. keep up the great work
Protee -
Yeah, definitely has a lot of emotion that's really easy to read. (I can relate too)
Love the ending, "three little questions," that makes the piece seem so simple, but so intense and a bit complicated. Adds a nice touch.
My only suggestions:
Run through spell-check
It was really hard to read this piece because my mind kept stopping at certain places to decipher what exactly you were saying.
And then, maybe just go through the grammar... it'll help the piece look better (If you're about image)
Otherwise, this was a really good write and I encourage you to write more!
Holla,
Oxemity -
Nice write! Full of emotion and heartbreak. I can def. relate. Keep up the good work!
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