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Your World Upside Down

Reality and fantasy combined
Heaven and hell intertwined
Black to white
And day to night
Feelings of happiness when somebody dies
And when a baby's born tears feel your eyes
Its where all rights are wrongs
Edgar Allan Poe writes love songs
You kill yourself to live
And stay alive to die
You never try
You always cry
Every time you lie
Stick a needle in your eye
Where love is hate
And you cant choose your own fate
A smiles a frown
This world's upside down
You cant break free
Take it from me
This life's a lie
You live to die
You lose to win
Your living in sin
Don't look at me
Or you will see
The blades your only friend
This is the beginning of the end

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Written May 3rd, 2006

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