O your body is so sweet,
Sweeter than all the honey I can eat,
And it plays havoc with my mind,
All I do is think about it all of the time.
Your eyes both sparkle with that glow,
And the knowledge of all you know,
Makes me feeble and so weak,
With every breath you steal I cannot speak.
What is it about you makes me so hot?
You can tie me up in knots,
You have absolute control,
And you own me body and soul.
(REFRAIN)
But then they say that flesh is weak,
And it will pass in a heart beat,
They condemn it and call it a sin,
If that's the case hell can take me in.
O me O my the memory's sweet,
Sweeter than all the honey I could eat,
You've got me going on a roll,
Now you own me body an' soul.
So now I know there's no reprieve,
If this is faith, hell I believe,
Girl/Boy! you're my special candy treat,
And sweeter than all the honey I could ever eat.
You make me feel so damned alive,
I'd sell my soul to just survive,
Yeah! you totally drive me wild,
You can use and abuse me all the time...
(REFRAIN)
Author notes
Ah! love or lust... a candy treat & good enough to eat!
A contest entry
- Save Me Emotions by Emo Poppy Seed.
300 points, ended May 21, 2006, 33 entries
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Don't really care for the honey reference. I'm trying not to be brutal, but that part was pretty corny. Thanks for entering.
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Good job. I would watch your grammar and punctuation as that is a couple of the criteria we're using to judge the contest. Good write though and good luck in the contest.
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