Its so easy to fall
So easy to stumble
When I know you're behind me
Lovings not a chore
And neither is sex
When your
Eyes and soul
Are my fuel
My lips
Heart
Body
And everything
I have, is yours
Because life just isn't
The same after you
It makes sense
I learn more
Breathe more
Love more
Earn more
My words are truer than any before
My eyes are
Focused on you
My body fits with yours
My personality
Plays off yours
I never have to show off
Or dress up
Lose weight
Or change my hair
Because physical
To us
Is nice, but
The emotion will
Never compare
I love how you smell
Dress
And sing
I love how you wore
My flower ring
I cant wait for your
Laugh your
Smile
Your sweetness
The way you are a gentlemen
And always hold doors
To the way you offer
Me food and always
Give me yours
I love how we cuddle
I love how you move
I seriously like to
Snuggle all nude
Your jokes are
Hilarious
Your mind is
Intense
Your creative side is
Insanely
Immense
You have
Such an insight
And a great mind
If I was in it
I might get left behind
You're colorful
Hugable
And easy to
Trust
The way you rub
My neck keeps
Me wanting
Your touch
I hold you close
I share my heart
If you were to leave
Id lose my other part
You're the yin to my yang
The paint on my brush
The combination of us
Is really a
Must
You make me glow
You make me
Shine
When I'm with
You
No smile is bigger
Than mine
Ive never been so happy
Its never felt so
Right
The way you smack
My cheeks makes me laugh
All night
I can see myself
Grow
Old
And grey
And picture all of our kids
Someday
I'm connected
I can feel it
I'm hooked
Like on drugs
I would give you all my money
If I could live off
Your hugs
I'm ecstatic
You found
Me
What else can I say
Destiny has rooted
In my favor
And it smiles
Our way
Problems may come and tears may flow but
I know
Yours are
The only arms in
That I know I can
Grow
Author notes
Written May 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- some one you love by black69no1.
300 points, ended May 9, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Emotional and lovely
This is one poet who will cry if ever the ink runs dry in your pen, Clamchoder. This is deffinently an awsome write and the form makes all the more real and intense. The love felt here is not comparable to anything else that I have read. And I loved the rhyming scheme, a tandom to the style with which this was written. Thank you for sharing this one, and Keep it up!!!
Poetic Hearts -
wow this was a neat form of poetry and so well done, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry and good luck in this contest.
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beautiful
Chamchoder, what a wonderful poem that was written by one who really understands the true meaning of love, which is beyond appearance, financial status, and every other kind of division. I love the way you are not afraid, and don't hold back your true feelings. Your soul mate and inspiration for whom you wrote this poem is very fortunate to have you. A lovely poem indeed!
Scorpio Rising

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