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Pinch Me

Its so easy to fall

So easy to stumble

When I know you're behind me



Lovings not a chore

And neither is sex

When your

Eyes and soul

Are my fuel



My lips

Heart

Body

And everything

I have, is yours

Because life just isn't

The same after you

It makes sense

I learn more

Breathe more

Love more

Earn more



My words are truer than any before

My eyes are

Focused on you

My body fits with yours

My personality

Plays off yours



I never have to show off

Or dress up

Lose weight

Or change my hair



Because physical

To us

Is nice, but

The emotion will

Never compare



I love how you smell

Dress

And sing

I love how you wore

My flower ring



I cant wait for your

Laugh your

Smile

Your sweetness

The way you are a gentlemen

And always hold doors

To the way you offer

Me food and always

Give me yours



I love how we cuddle

I love how you move

I seriously like to

Snuggle all nude



Your jokes are

Hilarious

Your mind is

Intense

Your creative side is

Insanely

Immense

You have

Such an insight

And a great mind

If I was in it

I might get left behind



You're colorful

Hugable

And easy to

Trust

The way you rub

My neck keeps

Me wanting

Your touch



I hold you close

I share my heart

If you were to leave

Id lose my other part



You're the yin to my yang

The paint on my brush

The combination of us

Is really a

Must



You make me glow

You make me

Shine

When I'm with

You

No smile is bigger

Than mine



Ive never been so happy

Its never felt so

Right



The way you smack

My cheeks makes me laugh

All night



I can see myself

Grow

Old

And grey

And picture all of our kids

Someday



I'm connected

I can feel it

I'm hooked

Like on drugs

I would give you all my money

If I could live off

Your hugs



I'm ecstatic

You found

Me



What else can I say

Destiny has rooted

In my favor

And it smiles

Our way

Problems may come and tears may flow but

I know

Yours are

The only arms in

That I know I can

Grow

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Written May 3rd, 2006

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  • Poetic Hearts
    August 9

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    Emotional and lovely

    This is one poet who will cry if ever the ink runs dry in your pen, Clamchoder. This is deffinently an awsome write and the form makes all the more real and intense. The love felt here is not comparable to anything else that I have read. And I loved the rhyming scheme, a tandom to the style with which this was written. Thank you for sharing this one, and Keep it up!!!

    Poetic Hearts


  • Heartofacircle
    May 3, 2006
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    wow this was a neat form of poetry and so well done, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry and good luck in this contest.

  • Mercury Rising
    May 3, 2006
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    beautiful

    Chamchoder, what a wonderful poem that was written by one who really understands the true meaning of love, which is beyond appearance, financial status, and every other kind of division. I love the way you are not afraid, and don't hold back your true feelings. Your soul mate and inspiration for whom you wrote this poem is very fortunate to have you. A lovely poem indeed!

    Scorpio Rising