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The Winds Of Spring

The winds of Spring are coming.
Love is in the air.

Cupid is ready with his Bow and
Arrow.

The winds are whispering:
"Look over there Cupid."

Cupid looks into the Park and
sees a couple Kissing in the dark.

He pulls back his Bow and shoots
his Arrow.

The winds of Spring gently guides
the Arrow right into the Two lover's
hearts.

Within moments of Cupid's time the
two hearts become one.

The winds of Spring are whispering
"cupid has captured two hearts once
again."

Yvonne J. Griffin
03/05/03

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SPRING IS COMING :)
Written March 5th, 2003

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  • Johnny Wheeler
    March 14, 2003
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    Sweet

    Awwwww sweet theme written so nicely. I actually SAW the poem as I read it! Good work Yvonne!


  • Rubee
    March 11, 2003
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    horrayyyy for spring, can't come soon enough for me LOL... this reminds me of that song, "~~little arrows in your clothing, little arrows in your hair, when you're in love you'll find those little arrows everywhere~~"...just thought I'd sing a bit for you, you got me in the mood with this one LOL

  • -Dawn-
    March 8, 2003
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    And thank goodness that it is Yvonne because this winter is really getting me down

    I could see this so clearly and this felt so warm and serene to me...ah love and spring...now you have me dreaming

    Beautiful poem

    ~~Dawn


  • Lurie
    March 5, 2003
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    Absoluutly wonderful

    Awww the cute images of Cupid I got from reading this!
    Very well written andd so sweet a write!
    ~Laura


  • sidewinder silver member
    March 5, 2003
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    Ahhh yes....
    Spring is coming sooner than we think!
    And life's experiences touch us all!
    well done!
    Bill

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