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I Lost It

You smiled as you passed
With a hint in your eyes
You had me for a while
But I caught on to your lies

You made me feel special
Like no one else had
You made me feel beautiful
And now it hurts ever so bad

A feeling of emptiness
Now that your gone
Knowing i never had you
Makes it even more wrong

And trying so hard
To tame my heart
But this feeling I've had for you
I've had from the start

And now it's lost
As soon as it came
But I'm left without a clue
As how to diminish this shame

So I stand back knowing
I'm left with what I started
A feeling of nothingness
Now that we've parted

Author notes

Victoria helped me with this a little but she portrayed the feelings perfectly...Recently i fell for a guy who didnt fall back.. and it hurts... so be truthfull and tell me what you think.........
Written May 2nd, 2006

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