At Peace

Arranging moments in life,
Turning point, what a delight.

Perfect world turned upside down,

Explaining feelings to a machine,

Allowing my heart to sing,

Careless mishaps while reading my thing,

Eternal bliss was felt knowing I released it all.

Yvonne J. Griffin

5/02/06

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Written May 2nd, 2006

By me, right now

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raggyann
June 7, 2006
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this one realy hit home tto me girlfriend
thank you for sharing
loutariro
May 3, 2006
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wow!
it's a few words but they say so much.it falls together so beautiful.
pruedence
May 2, 2006
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Yes! This is how it feels to release each word to make a meaningful piece of work...nice work.
Robin Candor
May 2, 2006
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Released it all? Now that is a spendid sensation. You captured the modern world and that which is eternal in a very short space. I enjoy reading your work and wish you a great day. RC