I never realised how much it means,
to have a guy who does all those simple little things,
that make you smile inside and out,
that remind you of how much he really care.
those silly little messages he leaves,
the phone calls with no point,
I never realised just how much they mean to me,
Until you came along.
And now I know that there is love in the world,
Not in overblown gestures,
or just in the way you kiss,
but in all those little simple things i miss.
I know you're not really gone,
It's just distance that keeps us appart,
but even the distance from those simple little things,
wont take them from my heart.
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I started writing this and liked it, but now Im not so sure, I dont think it reads all that well, but that might be me being over critical of my own work. meh.
Written May 2nd, 2006
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Aw, that was a sweet one. It really made me smile. And filled my heart with a bit of happiness- for you. It was nice and comfortable to read.
It also made me think of my guy best friend. That makes me seriously thoughtful 
hehe 
Sineana
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Mmm, thank you, im still not sure, but if i change it i think i will just end up getting annoyed lol, im sure i will grow to like it. im just annoyed that i cant put down what i want to in better words.
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Great write. You're completely off course there hun, your poem reads just fine.
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