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Mesmerized

You stood there as a formless shadow
within my dreams but conjured up
whenever the wanton sensations ensnared
my breasts

Not thinking of anything that
could deem this as a fantasy,
here we are lying entangled
underneath supple longings

Momentarily, you've been enticed
on more than one occasion--seducing
these emotions while catering to
our mingling breaths

Now here I sleep thinking of
that fantasy once more; longing to
the choosen shadows of spells....

...while simply waiting for you
to return again in my wanton
dreams

Author notes

lol i was bored so ummmm yeah
Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 1, 2007

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    This is very beautifully sensual and ultra seductive! I love it!
    Thank you so much for sharing; it's a very good piece!
    I wish you all the best!


  • B Chandler
    May 3, 2006
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    lol ty Rowan

  • Rowan gold member
    May 3, 2006
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    Bored eh?! Well, this definitely wasn't a boring read Rae!
    Very seductive, and fine!

  • Sunshinegf
    May 3, 2006
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    i love this poem just amazing to read