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Sad song, Silly stupid girl

numbly she turned up the bottle of wine
and she was so tired of this routine she threw it away
happy, never anymore
was she
alone, like times before
was she
without thought she turned to the door and walked away
and what if when she crossed the threshold she just diappeared?

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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • JaydinC
    May 2, 2006
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    I loved it, if only it was a little longer. Very well put together, I only wish it was longer so I could know whats going on with her.