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Tears

Clear formations in cloudy eyes
Cascading from many sources
Heartfelt happiness; Shattered dreams
Tiredness of body, weariness of soul
Coming from deep within
They roll down ashen faces
Carrying with them
Pain of consequence

Tears of fire
Wounding words
Sneaky slights
Furious fury beyond compare
A bottled wish expressed in form of a
Boiling liquid flame and a clenched fist

Tears of water
Washing away scarring pain
Running long-ways down a sinking face
Escaping from the cracks of a shattered heart

Tears of air
Happiness of heights undreamed
Potential realised
Visions of peace and golden sunshine take shape

Tears of earth
Return to roots
Cycle completed to begin again
Light dimmed by dark damp cold


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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • honey bear silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    very good

    a wonderfull , beautifull poem ,keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us


  • drusilla36
    May 2, 2006
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    Beautiful...utterly beautiful, brought tears to my eyes
    really really nice piece of work
    Dru xxx