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Coffee talk

I open the curtains and let the sun come through
What a glorious day it is
I scurry around the kitchen to set things up
I find our two favorite cups
and set them across from each other
The smell of coffee brewing fills the rooms
with the scent of freshly baked muffins
It has been a long time
But I know when we see each other again
time will just slip away, it always does

The knock on the door
The face of my friend on the other side
What a wonderful sight you are dear friend
We hug and I feel the years apart disappear
We are young girls again, carefree and innocent
ready to share our secrets and our lives
I have so much to tell you and share with you
It has always been so easy for us to talk
and through all these years, it has never changed
So let’s sit and share...I’ll pour the coffee....

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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • WolfHeart silver member
    September 15, 2006
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    lovely

    Very sweet. Such a nice poem of friendship and understanding. It is precious to find a person who knows what you mean and who will listen.
    hugs Wolfie

  • runandhide
    August 9, 2006
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    This is soo cool. Its sweet and beautiful, and cozy and everything. AWesome job!
    What a wonderful sight you are dear friend
    We hug and I feel the years apart disappear
    I love this. And this:
    I have so much to tell you and share with you
    It has always been so easy for us to talk, AND THIS
    I find our two favorite cups
    and set them across from each other
    Actually, i like all of it
    Luv,
    Rah.

  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 20, 2006
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    I DO THAT EVEN OVER THE PHONE. I call a friend or one of my sisters and tell them its coffee time .

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    Isn't wonderful eamarti? Good friends make this world go round.

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    Yes this is a friendship that has been going on for more than 30yrs. We have gone through everything. We say that we are friends because we know too much about eachother..LOL

    PS. Find a nice long and wide cloud..I feel a tango coming on..LOL
    Noreen
  • eamarti
    June 30, 2006
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    Ah Coffee, a good cup and the company of a dear friend is special to me too. Your poem left me feeling warm and content recognising the importance of good friends in ones life - really nice write.

  • Swtpoetryman
    June 30, 2006
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    A PIECE SWEETER THAN THE SUGAR IN MY COFFEE!

    A lovely poem or a long and endearing friendship! It is one of lifes true blessings, indeed - to share special moments like these with a friend who will remain so till the end - a friend to share the good times and the bad times - and to help lift the weight of the world from your shoulders if the occasion shall ever arise - and one who knows she can count on you to do the same! That coffee and a muffin souds delicious to an old fellow like me!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.

    Now, i really must go and study the clouds! LOL!!!!
  • Uriah Hamilton
    May 2, 2006
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    good

    A lovely poem, the poet ea on allpoetry appreciates coffee poems, you should look her up!!
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