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Sweet Suicide

Forget me now and never look back
Lost in fields of pot and crack
Tie the string around your bag of coke
I hope you rot and fucking choke
Needles full of your heaven
Stick it in and close your eyes
Lost in all your highs
Red dilated eyes show your "attractive" side
When you have problems you just hide
Why don't you grow up a little bit
Because I'm really tired of your shit
Drugs can only last so long
It only proves your weak, not strong
If you really want to fuck up your life
Take that knife
Press it against your wrist
Feel the sting of the cutters bliss
Let blood run out of your vein
And watch it travel down the drain
Or tie a rope around your neck
And jump off  your back deck
Take a bottle of pills
And see how slow it kills
If you want to throw your life away
Why don't you just end it today
Instead of drugs to help you hide
Just choose sweet suicide

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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • Tripple-HeadedDevil
    May 12, 2006
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    wow this was definately the best i've read all day. good luck

    Yami


  • lost n confused
    May 2, 2006
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    wow i love this poem I loved how it flowed and On a scale of 1-5 I give you a 6 I loved it great job keep up the good work this poem just made me get a warm fuzzy feeling.. And i donno why but i loved it

    Edited on May 02, 9:48 because ''.