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I Can't Be Perfect

Eyes so swollen and sore
because of something that unnecessary
it didn't have to happen . . .

You said it once more
You said the words once more.
The words that cut me up inside
Make my heart bleed
and my body shake
me not able to breathe . . .

All I have to say to you is

I'm sorry I can't be perfect

x

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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • ShinyStar
    May 15, 2006
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    Thank you Nini

  • Time focus on Me
    May 11, 2006
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    Wow your peoms hit me gurl i love dis poem its amazing i mean amazing but beautiful at the same time and I hope u are doing ok u expresed your self so well in da this poem keep up the marvelous work and hope ya situations get betta ttyl love always NiNi

  • ShinyStar
    May 4, 2006
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    Thank you Ash
    x

  • Moonbeam Baby
    May 3, 2006
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    aww im really sorry about whatever the situation may be... never try to be perfect..just try to be you and everything will work out for the best!Love ya byebye ~Ash

  • ShinyStar
    May 3, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words
    x

  • ShinyStar
    May 3, 2006
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    Thank you x x x

  • bas-hful
    May 2, 2006
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    you may not realize it, but you are perfect in every single way. never forget that. this is really short, but to the point and great. sorry to see that you cant please one person, but im sure there are so many more who think you are great. Keep up the great work.
    -Sara


  • CelticKisses
    May 2, 2006
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    You are perfect. It's just they can't accept that, whoever it is.
    I hope you're alright. If you're not and you need to talk, you know where I am.
    x

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