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Sorceress Storm- The Serious Qualifications

And after Lio hears my words
He'll know we're out for him and his nerds
To take them down, forever fall
He and his army are going to crawl

This sorceress of power with hand to the sky
Calls upon the storms for a dark ally
Spins the winds in cyclonic rage
And hurricane rains my fury staged

Chants and spells, the darkest potions
To set that Lio's fall in motion
My magic, the most powered of the land
The elements all abide my command

I'm no petty sorceress, you see
I come with the highest skilled degree
My doings lean towards the treacherous side
These alluring powers can't be denied

So to you, the Dark King I plead
To be your source in time of need
My intent with you is to please
As we bring King Lio to his knees

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My technical qualifications, my Dark King
Written May 1st, 2006

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  • intanglio2ring
    May 4, 2006
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    HEAR YE HEAR YE ! A MESSAGE FROM KING DARKER KNIGHT

    I got problems, tang. becuase of work, i may not be able to come back onlne until most likely NEXT weekend. I am going to try to colab my contest with soemone. i guess they will have to figure soemthing out. i'm gonna miss out on the fun. i will try to comeback online as soon as i can. most likely on saturday afternoon or sunday night, but will only be for a few minutes. I hate working 20 hour days. talk to ya later. please let everyone know ok? sorry, cum. i was really looking forward to this war.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 3, 2006
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    LMAO, when I first read this I though you were calling King Lio Kong. OMG!! But yes, we shall make one powerful brood.

    Storm

  • Eyes Of Rain
    May 3, 2006
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    A sorceress that will make us strong
    The nerds will fall like mighty Kong
    We shall beat Lio at his own game
    And make him bow his head in shame
    We shall claim King Lio's throne
    You, the sorceress, and I, The Crone.

    Great write, best of luck.
    ~Sherry~
    Edited on May 03, 12:15 because ''.

  • Legend silver member
    May 3, 2006
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    You'll take me down? now are you sure
    my friend I've heard geese fart before
    There are many who have tried
    and everyone I've put aside
    For I'm a warrior of the light
    and do not walk in fear at night
    I hate to treat a lady so
    but something that you ought to know
    Your wily ways are doomed to fail
    Our noble army will prevail
    So slink back to dead of night
    and be prepared to see the light
    Your optimism is absurd
    at battles end you'll meet this nerd


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 3, 2006
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    Your nerds will never see the light
    As we take them deep into the night
    Drown them in our sea of black
    Where there'll be no coming back
    This mean you just the same
    As we take down King Lio's reign.

    Sorceress Storm


    (Thanks for the comments though)

  • Legend silver member
    May 3, 2006
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    How mad you'll be to eat your words
    when beaten by a load of nerds
    And you with all your magic powers
    believe you'll win with April showers
    If you'd the powers you would see
    our noble king won't bend a knee
    To those who claim they have the force
    who makeup is tomato sauce
    My friend you know what you can do
    with your so call magic brew
    Bottle it as orange squash
    or better still use it to wash






  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 1, 2006
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    Yes, this may be true, but when magic is involved, ALL the rules are disregarded.

    Thanks for the comment, apprecitate it.
    Storm

  • KnightRhymer
    May 1, 2006
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    It may take a man to bend a man to his knees, but a woman knows how to humble him. A very interesting resume, Storm. we shall see.

  • 0darkAngel0
    May 1, 2006
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    "... it takes a man to make a man bend his knees..."

    very nice piece. well written...

    (just for fun)
    Edited on May 01, 1:06 p.m. because ''.
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