And after Lio hears my words
He'll know we're out for him and his nerds
To take them down, forever fall
He and his army are going to crawl
This sorceress of power with hand to the sky
Calls upon the storms for a dark ally
Spins the winds in cyclonic rage
And hurricane rains my fury staged
Chants and spells, the darkest potions
To set that Lio's fall in motion
My magic, the most powered of the land
The elements all abide my command
I'm no petty sorceress, you see
I come with the highest skilled degree
My doings lean towards the treacherous side
These alluring powers can't be denied
So to you, the Dark King I plead
To be your source in time of need
My intent with you is to please
As we bring King Lio to his knees
Author notes
My technical qualifications, my Dark King
Written May 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Wanted: Dark Allies for a War by KnightRhymer.
300 points, ended May 9, 2006, 11 entries
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HEAR YE HEAR YE ! A MESSAGE FROM KING DARKER KNIGHT
I got problems, tang. becuase of work, i may not be able to come back onlne until most likely NEXT weekend. I am going to try to colab my contest with soemone. i guess they will have to figure soemthing out. i'm gonna miss out on the fun. i will try to comeback online as soon as i can. most likely on saturday afternoon or sunday night, but will only be for a few minutes. I hate working 20 hour days. talk to ya later. please let everyone know ok? sorry, cum. i was really looking forward to this war.
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LMAO, when I first read this I though you were calling King Lio Kong. OMG!! But yes, we shall make one powerful brood.
Storm -
A sorceress that will make us strong
The nerds will fall like mighty Kong
We shall beat Lio at his own game
And make him bow his head in shame
We shall claim King Lio's throne
You, the sorceress, and I, The Crone.
Great write, best of luck.
~Sherry~
Edited on May 03, 12:15 because ''. -
You'll take me down? now are you sure
my friend I've heard geese fart before
There are many who have tried
and everyone I've put aside
For I'm a warrior of the light
and do not walk in fear at night
I hate to treat a lady so
but something that you ought to know
Your wily ways are doomed to fail
Our noble army will prevail
So slink back to dead of night
and be prepared to see the light
Your optimism is absurd
at battles end you'll meet this nerd
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Your nerds will never see the light
As we take them deep into the night
Drown them in our sea of black
Where there'll be no coming back
This mean you just the same
As we take down King Lio's reign.
Sorceress Storm
(Thanks for the comments though) -
How mad you'll be to eat your words
when beaten by a load of nerds
And you with all your magic powers
believe you'll win with April showers
If you'd the powers you would see
our noble king won't bend a knee
To those who claim they have the force
who makeup is tomato sauce
My friend you know what you can do
with your so call magic brew
Bottle it as orange squash
or better still use it to wash
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Yes, this may be true, but when magic is involved, ALL the rules are disregarded.
Thanks for the comment, apprecitate it.
Storm -
It may take a man to bend a man to his knees, but a woman knows how to humble him. A very interesting resume, Storm. we shall see.
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"... it takes a man to make a man bend his knees..."
very nice piece. well written...
(just for fun)
Edited on May 01, 1:06 p.m. because ''.
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