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I Owe You A Pint

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There’s only one thing that I regret
About allpoetry.com, my favorite site.
It’s that we all can’t meet at the pub
And have a pint together some night.

 

I would love to meet every one of you
Person to person, and shake your hand
For the inspiration you have given me
And all you’ve helped me to understand.

 

The Internet is a modern wonder for sure 
And it’s better than nothing, I suppose.
But it can’t replace your eyes, your smile,
Or the infectious way your laughter flows.

 

And way too much can be misconstrued
By black and white letters upon a page
Until one word, meaning no harm at all,
Throws some sensitive soul into a rage.

 

The sensitivite nature of poets is the stuff of legend. 
But to access their truth, it’s a price willingly paid. 
So a big group of poets is a very volatile mixture
And anonymous strangers are too easily betrayed.

I wonder, if we were all friends in real life,
Would hurtful words be so easily spoken?  
Lack of accountability makes us reckless
For we don't witness what we've broken.

Another poet here once hit me and I hit back.
We got so angry, each wanted the other to die.
But we live in the same city so I met him one day.
Guess what?  He was a perfectly wonderful guy.

And similar miracles would undoubtedly happen
If we could all put a face to our AP usernames;
If actual, live, breathing people could emerge
From behind all our colorful, quirky nicknames.

Maybe I'm being a touch too optimistic
But I think we'd all get along just fine.
And even my most venomous critics
Would end up being friends of mine.

Who cares if we don't share the same opinions?
How much does it matter at the end of the day?
When the fight's over, you're still you and I'm me.
And you know what, my friend?  I like it that way.




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The photo is of the Crown Bar in Belfast, Northern Ireland, my favorite hang-out when I visit there.
Written April 30th, 2006

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  • AusStar gold member
    May 2

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    I'll meet you for a pint next year, as long as its your shout!! Actually you are right about comments being misconstrued, thats why I'm awfully careful what i write on websites. Before you read anything, imagine the persons sitting opposite you at a cafe and you are having a coffee together as friends, I guarantee when you put it in that context, you never get offended.


  • trulymadlydeeply
    January 20, 2007

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    Came here by a random click. Visted your page too..I like your sense of humor.
    Glad to see you guys lowered your swords so that you could see beyond the tip. I've read alot of comments where there was bickering. I won't even comment on the poem after that. I think it just takes away from the poem itself. Aside from the fact that it is incredibly immature. Fortunately and happily the meeting turned out well. But you know, you really don't have to put a face here on the pages to know the poet. A screen name says a lot about the person.
    Your poem has wonderful fluidity, doesnt rush but trickles into each stanza. Great work. Look forward to reading more of you. Do you have a favorite?
    df


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      January 22, 2007
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      Dollface,

      Thanks very much. I've done my share of bickering around here but it really is a waste of time. Slamming each other doesn't change anything. I have a lot of favorites on this site - but I think my favorite is Balladeer. He writes mainly rhyming story poems like this one. The man is brilliant.

      Take care,

      Mark

  • RushofBlood666
    May 1, 2006
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    That was awesome, nice profile by the way very intresting explains a lot i suppose. Good job i like it.

  • Emerald Dreams
    May 1, 2006
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    I have meet many friends here AP, many of whom I wish lived closer so that we may meet. Thanks for sharing.

  • heismysong silver member
    May 1, 2006
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    I'd come to meet you (-wherever that may be), but I'm not rich! LOL

    Christian School teaching wages aren't exactly upper class level- but hey! I'm earning greater rewards in Heaven, right? (I hope!)

    I met a different poet on here, but that's because we both have the same journal site, too. I met her on there first. It was awesome!

    Neat poem! You can almost hear the music to "Cheers" when looking at that picture...

    Too bad I don't drink- I've never set foot in a bar in my life, and probably never will. Oh well.

  • fool no1
    May 1, 2006
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    You are so right Mark, we are a very sensitive bunch us poets.I think that is because we actually feel the words, and though they may be on a screen and not spoken face to face doesn't make them any the less meaningful. Perhaps an AP pub is called for where we could join each other for a cyber pint and maybe share some smiles along the way....Excellent thought and write..take care...mal

  • Sensual Sapphire
    May 1, 2006
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    I would have to agree with you in this I know several people here on AP I would love to meet face to face. Friends I have made that I know I would cherish even more. With tone and inflection being lost it is easy to misunderstand another here as well and tempers boil as is testament to our emotional nature. I never see the glass as half full or half empty I just want to know who drank the rest of it? Thank you for entering our contest and good luck.

  • May 1, 2006
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    I loved this!!! it is so very true. I have wondered the same things and I know that deep inside that those who share the love of words they way we do must be someone special and would traet otheres the same way too. I guess I am extremely optimistic. But hey what else do we have these days.

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    May 1, 2006
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    Oh Mark , this is a real good example of what lies behind a good human being. I am now not looking at you as either a poet or a writer or any of that sort.....just a heart and a soul. Many of us do always wish for all that you wrote here to really be so. Unfortunately that only lasts until we really look at the world and see that homo sapiens thrive on criticising others. And even if we would allow them credit for their talents , we would find fault with the way they are dressed, or wear their hair , or their weight or heaven forbid they have a zit on their forehead or nose. There is within every human being the need and the drive to , just as it is in animal to be alpha ,
    much love and please stay whom and exactly what you are. People like you are needed in this world
    reenie
    Edited on May 01, 5:49 because ''.

  • Legend silver member
    May 1, 2006
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    Mark a great write I have a feeling that such a meeting would end up in the bar room brawl of all times, but what poems we could get from that.
    We poets tend to be very volatile when our work is under attack,I guess i look at it as ,Well at least it was read.
    Sometimes i think it is when bad comment is placed in the comments section It is there for everyone to read, and when that happens many jump on the wagon and let rip also, so a decent piece can get a right slating.
    I like to give an encouraging comment Then IM the poet personally with anything i think would improve the work. That way it seem a more decent way to point things out and not for others eyes to read
    As i said a great idea but perhaps the anonymity of the poet adds to the pleasure of the write as if one met and dislike the poet personally then one could be denied reading some very good work.
    Great job

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 1, 2006
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    Yeah, it's a zeph - a zepher - what you said. lol

  • chills
    May 1, 2006
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    Most gallant of you kind sir. Some UK expressions do seem to imflame our friends across the big puddle. Also our rather seedy and bizarre sense of humour...... Rose accepted in the spirit given. Hope it's a Zephrin Drouhin... hee hee!!

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 1, 2006
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    Very true. I tend to give what I get a little too much. I know I should be more enlightened and react to insulting language with love and peace, but it's sooooo hard to do sometimes. haha I'm sure you're just a peach in real life.

    Thanks for trying to be nice. Much appreciated.

    Mark

    P.S. Here's a rose for ya. (Peace offering. lol)

  • chills
    May 1, 2006
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    This was great!! You might even like some of us peculiar brits if we met for a mild and bitter and a bag of pork scratchings....!! See - I can be nice if I try. Shame you couldn't put a face to me on my author page...... ha ha!!
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