Stressed out about life
Overwhelming responsibility
Trying to stay strong during this time
But the world is crashing down
During your hard times
Reach out for Christ
Look for Him in your troubles
For He alone can save you
Never underestimate his Love
For He loves you beyond anyone else
Even when everyone else has abandoned you
Come into His presence and be prepared to be revived
Father God, I pray for Chelsea
Place Your hand of blessing upon her
Let her have the strength she needs
To give to You all of her problems
May she continue to grow in You
Even while she is hurting today
Amen.
Author notes
Stanza was inspired by by the Relient K song, "Never Underestimate My Jesus" .... This isn't one of my best writes... and Chelsea, I'll write you something better later on. 
Thanks for reading!
Written April 30th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Cheer My AP Daughter Up by Mickie27.
350 points, ended May 1, 2006, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Outstanding write of faith and the good that lies in God if you just believe and let go and let God Great writing I need to read this as I struggle with my faith thanks for your time to read and comment on my poetry as well
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aww. thats really good!*** You're awesome! haha. o btw, i 'added' you on myspace, sry don't have a pic* but i'm Your Everything~
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Why thank you so much for your comment
It's always nice to know other people like my work. Thanks for reading
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This is a pretty powerful poem and I can see why it won 1st place. Well done!
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Thank you very much for the comments
I'm glad you liked it!
--Tim -
touching
Thats really awesome that youre so into God.You are EXTREMELY talented -
Thank you very much for your very encouraging comment! It always helps me to keep writing to hear people say things like what you just said. God bless you
--Tim -
this was wonderful! how great that you are a christian as young as you are. it took me to middle age to wise p and find God. Your poem is great and very encouraging. keep writing! Yo are very talented.
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This was beautifully written and I loved it! Amazing job with this, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work!
♥
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I am glad you found this encouraging too, sis! I won the gold with this poem, although I have no idea how.
Thank you very much for your comment
--Tim -
This was such an uplifting poem Tim...I could even apply it to what I'm going through right now...what a blessing it was for me to be able to read this tonight. Great bit of encouragement for all who read it! Noble1
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lalala....hey, check out the name We have revival tonight that I am going to go to...I think...and so, I'll try and talk to you later thanks again for this beautifully written poem.
*God Bless*
~*Chelsea*~ -
A beautiful write thanks so much for writing this. The flow was excellent. Did not sound forced at all. Had a special meaning.
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Even if I wrote you a millino poems like this, it wouldn't show you how much you mean to me and it wouldn't repay you for all that you have done for me in the past and continue to do. You are truly a wonderful friend to me and I feel privaleged to have known you. Oh, while I'm thinking about it... were you ever going to change your name to FireyAura since you messed it up that first time?
Just curious...
--Tim -
Thank you, Kara I don't think I'm the best encourager, but I know how to listen and that's what counts most, right? I'm glad I could help you out whenever you need someone to talk to
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yay!!!!!!!!!1
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Timothy, this is pure beauty I love it...thanks for cheering me up. YOu really know how to do that....honestly it is amazing. Thank you so much for this. You really did not have to, but it really lifted my spirits today....but then again, so does all of your poetry
Hope that things are ok with you. Praying for you
*God Bless*
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AWW!this was so sweet,you do know how to cheer people up(and im not jokeing) great write!
God Bless,
Kara
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