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Your Queen and Master

Insanity makes you fun
Live, die, but always have fun
But if you wish to be free
Don?t you forget
To beg the Queen
To give back your soul

She, the Queen of Shadows
Stole your soul
When you were exposed
And placed you
Within her legions of knights
To live or to die
As is her whim

You, chained to the wall
You, led around on a leash
It is her pleasure
So be it yours
Beg for mercy
Beg for more
She will extend your pain
If you so desire

But if you wish to be free
Wild and free
As it was meant to be
She will give it to you

And if you can guess
Who the Queen is
She might give you a little bit more

Author notes

hahahahahahaha......
i randomly came up with this poem through a comment i made
Written April 30th, 2006

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  • Spooky Black Wolf
    March 6, 2008

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    It's WONDERFUL

    Mrs. Horine thinks that it sounds like a rock song, and I told her that knowing you,"It's possible." I miss you. Are you that busy these days?


  • Wee Beastie
    May 3, 2006
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    i have a tendesy to repeat a lot of things
    it is just the way i write


  • April 30, 2006
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    interesting concept, but i don't much like the idea that repeats, that's more in song lyrics, which you could probably exaggerate better than in a poem. still, i liked the idea yo. keep working at it :]


  • WelshDragon
    April 30, 2006
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    Sounds like a bit of S&M to me . Interesting conundrum. Makes the reader think. Like it !


  • Lilith-blackwing
    April 30, 2006
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    interesting

    This is a rather interesting poem. It sounds that the person likes to be hurt . maybe feels he is supposed to be .

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