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Stayed for Her

Inside your stomach
An Angel was growing
I knew it was an angel
Because the way your stomach grew and glowed.
I am happy to be the Aunt of Daisy Nicole
But on the side of happiness,
There was a shade of suicide.

I wanted to take my razor and press it against my wrist
But I thought long and hard,
Soon the baby was to arrive at any time
And i took my life away,
I would never see the angel,
That grew inside your belly.
I will never hold her or hear her laugh.
She will never hear me say her name.
Cause i be six feet under,
with dirt of regret on top of me.

Tears would be strolling
Cause all i would think of is Daisy
On the may to suicide commitment
but I made the decision of not go.
I stayed to see the angel,
That grew inside your belly

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Written April 30th, 2006

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  • Dream A Nightmare
    April 30, 2006
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    she was a very beautiful baby. took care of her when she came out of the hospital. man, i am glad i am still alive to see her everyday.

    thanks so much for giving me your critic on this.


  • starsandmoonshine
    April 30, 2006
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    this is very touching i understand your every word i am glad you are here smile angels are among you sweety.