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Happy Birthday, My Dear Daughter

Happy Birthday, My Dear Daughter

An acrostic from Mom to you on your special day….April 30th

How often does someone come into our lives
As you’ve come into mine
Paying respects and giving love
Persian princess or pauper, thief
You’d still be the same for me, Shahrzad

Bringing joy to me each day
In all you do, each word of love expressed
Rings out in harmony
Thoughtfulness and love so warm
Hugs and kisses and more
Don’t forget I love you, too
Always in my heart you’ll be
You, yes, you my dearest one

May all your wishes come true
You deserve each and every one

Don’t ever change your loving ways
Eternally you heart will glow
Ask and you shall receive, my dear
Remember nothing is too extreme

Days and nights are filled with joy
As again you gaze upon your realm
Using your charms, your kindly soul
Goodness controls your every thought
Happy Birthday, my dear daughter
There’s many more to come
Each one is your special day
Reach out and it shall be


I’m so happy, Shahrzad, that you have picked me to be your mom.  And I’m happy to say that you hold a place in my heart as if you were my own real daughter.
Happy Birthday!!


Dee Garner
© April 30, 2006

Author notes

Shahrzad has been a joy to me from the very first time we met on allpoetry.  I know I can count on getting a loving message from her each day.  It's a wonderful thing to feel her caring and love.  Thank you, Shahrzad, for being *YOU*

You can check out her poetry at:
www.allpoetry. com/shahrzad%2 0maftooh
Written April 30th, 2006

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  • smudge1
    May 13, 2006
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    LOVED THIS POEM ITS REALY NICE!!

  • pozo
    May 1, 2006
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    Great acrostic for the sister I didn't even know I had Keep writing, this was a lovely tribute which I liked a lot
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • individuality gold member
    May 1, 2006
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    I read this earlier in the night when I was logged out A smiling poem. Thanks for your words dee. I am on holiday at the moment

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 30, 2006
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    Beautiful! Shahrzad obviously loves this very much as much as she loves you. You've certainly shared a great relationship here. Keep it up. Nicely done.
    Brian


  • Starhiker
    April 30, 2006
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    Hi, Dee! Great acrostic you have made for our favorite persian princess, Shahrzad. Loved the creative way you made a good line out of each letter in the acrostic, and making each stanza complete and independant. I give you my applause, and I wish you best of luck in the contest! Jim

  • Desdemona
    April 29, 2006
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    OH MY DEE... that was sooo sweet.. i would give anything for my mom to write me something so sweet.. awwww.. they say you pick your parents... I don't know... pretty sweet.. Jealous LOL.. your a sweety


  • Shakari
    April 29, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful piece! Nobody is more deserving of it than Shahrzad, and she must be really thankful to have such a wonderful ap mom! Your talent at writing this acrostic is magnificent. You even made it flow. Keep up the great writing!


  • catz Moderators member
    April 29, 2006
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    Well, I couldn't miss an opportunity to wish you a Habby Birthday ..just think... next year you'll be 29, and for every year after that, too. I was 29 for many years until someone told me I looked old for my age So have bee 39 ever since

    Love and
    Mom
    Edited on Apr 29, 5:36 p.m. because ''.

  • Ir.muse
    April 29, 2006
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    wow...I love this lovely piece a lot my dear mom. That's so nice of you to write this wonderful piece for me.
    My birthday contest is now complete with your poem.
    Love you,
    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad

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