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People are Poems

People come and go
Over the years
Earning their words,
Taking chances,
Riding out their life,
Yearning to be like poetry.

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I wrote this for class. My teacher assigned 23 poems (all preselected types, this was the acrostic) and I'll probably post most of them here, I already put some up.
Written April 29th, 2006

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  • justxaxdream
    June 19, 2006
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    so sweet

    that was really pretty
    I liked it a lot
    It was extremely poetic and not many people can write a great acrostic, so this one blows a lot of them out of the water
    you did a great job on it!