it bristles my skin
the magic you behold
your touch makes me cringe
like never before
your love, your love
isn't there anymore
it's all about the duty now
n' you don't want me anymore
now that you've had me
it's all a waste of time
n' your sorry i'm broken by this
but you just want to be friends
and i hate your jovial nature
that you've had
since we broke it off
n' i hate your stunning blue-green eyes
that seem so beautifully composed.
n' you don't want me anymore
now that you've had me
it's all a waste of time
n' your sorry i'm broken by this
but you just want to be friends
yea, we were never just friends
Author notes
i wrote this when my first love dumped me.
*lyrics are my friend*
Written April 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Broken Past by Meyeryakov.
300 points, ended April 26, 2007, 20 entries
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comments always welcome
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ow. I hurt just reading this. Nice write. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck in it.
-Blue
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flaw-less
wow... your work is far more ideal than anything i never knew/read.. im left in great places in my mind with this flaw-less piece of work.. i would deffently like to make a remixed cover for this one... -
thanks so much
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I like this one I guess everyone had to go throught this at one time or another great poem and good luck
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I really like this
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