I don’t know what I would do,
Without the sense a hope I get from you
Just a few words can change my world
From down, and hopeless,
To finding the strength to continue.
I don’t know what I would do
Without the times you have made me smile
The times you made me laugh
And helped my tears stop,
I don’t know what I would do,
If I couldn’t talk to you.
I don’t know what I would do
If I ever lost you
I didn’t know that I would find someone
So kind, so caring, so much depth and understanding
I didn’t know that it was you,
Until I needed you the most
Though you are my friend,
That it would be you,
It would be you that is…
My hidden angel.
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what is life without hidden secrets to uncover, both the good and the bad? what is life without a friend with a hidden secret, trying to always to help you?
Life wouldnt be the same....
Written April 28th, 2006
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This was awesome awesome had a lot of emotion in it, though I have read better from you and I don't mean that in a bad way; this was really average I think with every poem you should strive for it to be the best. Except for a typo this poem was perfect you did a good job sweetie
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Wow this is, as usaual, a wonderful write by you. I always enjoy reading your work so much. It gives me yet more understanding and a better look at who you are and what you are feeling. You know I will always be here for you and will always be around whenevrer you need to talk. I love the flow of this poem and the message truly intrigues me. A secret huh? Well secrets are good but only if you reveal them. I don't know what to say. I don't know if I am getting the right message from this poem or not. If I am then I have to let you know that I am pleasantly surprised. I hope you will be able to open up to be and express all you feel inside for there are things that you should know as well. Again, I loved the poem as I love all your work. You always do write straight from your heart and soul and I love it. Thank you so much for sharing this with me. I will always be your angel and you mine. Now stop being so shy and open up to me my dear.
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this is great here. the words are just beautiful and so is the form. A FRIEND WITH A SECRET. i'm a friend and i have a secret but i cannot reveal it. great job.
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I love this poem for the point that i have a friend of mine just like this. She is absoluetly amazing and the sad thing is that i fell for her and i love her so much and she has a great boyfriend and is at a different school and life and i barely see her but through all that and what she has dealt with and what i have dealt with her i still love her to death and if she needs me day or night;whenver i am there cus she is one out of two people that have given me life and inspiration. I love angels and without them, life woudlnt be the same and hope and inspiration wouldnt be what it should be. This is a great poem and now im blabbing so im going to go. Great write.Keep it up! check out some of my writes?
-karen
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