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these are my feelings that i had to express

the morning star has risen
without you in my sight
and i hold onto the dreams
ive survived another night
and though the tears pour down
i manage to make it through
you may not be with me
but i can still feel you.

and there may be times
that one will want to leave
but we'll think back on the memories
and continue to believe.

these are my feelings that i had to express

Author notes

saying goodbye is always hard and its even harder when you dont know how to do it...
Written April 28th, 2006

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  • Balthazar
    January 18

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    Beautiful write. It's hard to say good bye to someone whom you care about and your poem has inspired me. Outstanding job


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 28, 2006
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    Very beautifully said.
    Saying goodbye is so hard
    especially when you love them.
    Well written.
    Great job.
    Jeannie D