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one little mistake

just one drink
can lead to more
and everytime
you'd hit the floor
you'd think of me
and what you've done
just thinking it
was all for fun

you've made a choice
and made your moves
and now its time
for me to prove
that what you've done
was out of line
and now i know
you cant be mine

she had always
had a place
in your heart
and to my disgrace
ive figured out
it wasnt true
the love i held
was not for you.

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whats done is done, but i will never forget.
i cannot live my life with regrets.....
Written April 28th, 2006

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  • Balthazar
    January 18
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    Very powerful poem.

  • orrisking
    June 21, 2006
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    searching for true love as been almost thing in life and i commisirate with u by showing true care for u.

  • mysterious heart
    April 28, 2006
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    great

    this is a great poem, i think regrets are the worst part of life and i have had plenty of them recently, this is a great poem, flows really well x