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Stairs

Down and down they go
Where they stop I don’t know.
 They could go on and on forever.
   To go back up would be very clever.
     But I will not go back upstairs just yet,
      Because with my friends I have a big bet.
       They said I would never go all the way down.
         I have to prove them wrong or I would just frown.
        A noise from below and now I must go.
      What it was, how would I ever know?
     Maybe those stairs do go on forever.
   Going down was not very clever.
 I’m not ready to go down yet.
I don’t care about any bet.

Author notes

this is a concrete poem and unlike most of my other poems it rhymes. Enjoy
Written April 28th, 2006

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 28, 2006
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    Very cute.
    I like the layout.
    Very well done.
    I could see the kids
    on the stairs!
    I liked it.
    Jeannie D