What is with this?
I’m seeing your face everywhere
Or at least your body
I see your hair on the stranger ahead of me
I hear your voice when you are nowhere near
And feel your breath against my neck
Even if it is just a wisp of air
I saw you in my dreams last night
I felt your arms around me
And your tongue caressing my lips
It was so real
So here
And even as I sit here writing this
I feel the press of those dreamed lips
And the heat of your body
How I wish it were real
That taste lingered
Passion gripped my heart
Love, my soul
Yet you are just another member in the archery line
Eye on the target
Arrow knocked
How I wish I were that target
And your lips were the arrows
Your love, the bow
Your passion, the string
Alas, it cannot be so.
Author notes
ah, the workings of dreams
Written April 28th, 2006
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Delicious....
Wow...the passion arose from this piece like....just amazingly well....
Loved your descriptive usage of words...
Truly marvelous....
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wow, thanks. i dont get many comments on old poetry. thanks alot.
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Tempting
Subtly provocative and filled with a yearning for passion. Love it!
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thanks, ya really are out to boost my moral!
thanks, kaz -
Wow. That was sooo awesome. You know. I was thinking back to all the other poems that I've read by you and it is soo awesome how they progress and become so awesome.. as everyone reading these can see. your awesome Kaz.
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no clue really, it was a dream. all i can remember is how the kiss felt:$
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Wow good job little brother....I impressed with this bro...Every Peom you write amazes me you always ends up finding a new angle everytime to you write...Anyways who is the peom about by the way...HW
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hehe, well it could be about that really cute exchange student, or others that have or were there.... hehe, you assume too much
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lol right...no way it's NOT about me
he he he womanly instincts have to be good every once in a while
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now who said i wrote this for you
ya never know
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OOOHHHH I love it!!!! so yes!!!! deffinatly!!!! ya can't stop with the exclemations!!!! I LOVE IT!!! and you did what i asked, lol good one !!!! EXCELLENTE good lol now deffinatly keep writing since you doing so good
Arianna -
lol, thanks, i'm glad i was able to enlighten your creative juices.
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10/10
This works. A poem that I can relate to and the final stanza is so seductive that it enlightens my creative juices so much. A fantastic write that deserves alot of praise
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