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A Black Rose Thorn

Who ever knew,
that you would die,
from the poison.
The poision on the rose,
the thorn sharply,
cutting through the skin.
Who ever knew,
that you would die,
from picking a rose,
to give to a love one.
Who would know,
that a black rose,
could do such a thing.


The bueaty it holds,
the protection,
is more.
For if it were to die,
they'd become extinct.
So if you chose this rose,
remember to not touch a thorn,
because the stem,
is harmless,
to any human who loves.
The thorn is just there,
to protect a heart,
from being broken.

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Written April 27th, 2006

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  • bloodyfears
    May 1, 2006
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    this is eally good...i like it
    awesome flow...thats important
    great emo...
    **julz**

  • DarkPoeticChic
    April 27, 2006
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    Thats really really beautiful. I like that alot it had a purity to it very good job

  • babygurl1014
    April 27, 2006
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    wow i liked it a lot. well get back at me. and umm. check mine out sometime. love keisha