I saw Jesus
past the sign
but I see
the rhyme
Jesus shook his head
and took a grin
as he walked by
and he grinned again
I smiled back
as I nodded my head
and he grinned again
"See you in heaven," Jesus said.
Author notes
12 years old
A contest entry
- Poetry Contest--For Children Up To Age 12 by kiwikrazi37.
450 points, ended August 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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i saw jesus too.
i smile looking in his eyes
he truly was the son of the lord.
he smiles,
"see ya in heaven after that bus..." Jesus said.
"what?????" i said.
"nothing...."Jesus walks away...
lol
i liked the poem 4 stars!
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Awww
I like the last line, it ties the whole poem up together nicely and leaves the readers smiling. Great job! Good luck in the contest. -
thanks!
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Yeah, it was good.
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Did you like it?
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Ok then. This is certainly...interesting.
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