Is it so very wrong,
That I find it impossible to trust,
Another man again,
Even if its love not lust?
Is it so very wrong,
That I want to move on,
Forget it ever happened,
Get with a guy and have some fun?
Is it so very wrong,
That I lie awake at night?
I don't want to close my eyes,
Then I see his face and get a fright.
Is it so very wrong,
That I just want to curl up and die?
I'm hurting everyone around me,
Because to my past I can't say goodbye.
Is it so very wrong,
That all this went on?
Maybe I deserved it,
But I don't know what I've done.
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Written April 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Come In and See! by Puking Faerie Dust.
350 points, ended May 1, 2006, 17 entries
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ive hurt people and now they dont trust others that suck why shoulkd other men pay because im a prick oh well i liked your poem good to see the other side of it all
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I understand what you mean, I went through something of the same *best friend, not a guy* and now I wonder if I'll ever be able to trust anyone again. Everyone's a possible heartbreak, and I've learned to guard my heart harder than I ever did before. You did a great job expressing your feelings.
~dreamer -
It's not your fault. i'm always there for you. I love you babe.
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Wow...this is an amazing, powerful write. And, let me tell you hunny, you did NOT deserve it. I've been going through the same thing that you're going through since 4th grade, but that's another story... anyways this is so strong and I love the last lines. Wonderful job; good luck
Jeanette*~
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