Outside by yourself.
A golden afternoon
Solitary
Listen to the birds singing,
the dog barking,
the car passing in the street.
Listen
You are not alone.
Author notes
Something short written on a whim
Written April 27th, 2006
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Oh and as an after thought, coming back to this poem you could use:
Hear the birds singing
rather than
Listen to the birds singing
because you use listen quite soon after that point in the poem and i beleive that this change wouldn't affect the overall flow of the poem.
x Catapultam x -
Ure first non-contamporary one!! It's really nice as well, sometimes a whim poem can be brill.
Reminds us that even when you feel all alone there is always someone around.
x Catapultam x
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