You eyes gouge into mine
And once again I'm filled with a passion,
A huge desire to be with you,
But I know it won't be
You're liquid grey stare penetrates my mind,
It's as if you're picking through my thoughts
And you know my exact feelings,
But you don't say a word
I want your warm embrace to never end
And your comforting body forever pressed against mine.
I want to curl up in your arms as I once did,
And I hope that what once was can be again.
This is not supposed to be emo,
Or a love letter,
Just a memory and a future wish
Author notes
I'm going soft.
Eyes just catch my attention.
Written April 27th, 2006
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this is interesting
you dont have to state that this isnt emo or a love letter,
and you're not going soft, im sure this side has always been with you. i miss reading your writings, its refreshing from a lot of the other things i read.
and i havn't been on here in a long time, but i hope you are still doing very well
i like this one by the way, you spelled the first word wrong though
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aw this is a sweet poem i really like it
thanks for sharing it with the rest of us and glad to see that youre back on ap i look forward to reading more
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I feel you haven't received comments in a while, because according to this you haven't posted in a while. Man, Its been a while since I've read poems, let alone yours. You should keep writing, or at least poem. I guess if you're expecting a critique, which I in a sense doubt, it was good and meaningful till you said "emo" at least to me. Message me when you get the chance georgia.
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yeah eyes of a passionate fatality i stare into the eyes of a ghost and feel the same feelings good rythm and flow keep it up
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lol, I'll allow you to call this one cute... but thats all! and I'm gald my author comment made you laugh! Thanks for reading, I've had writers block recently which has been so annoying but I think I'm coming out of it.
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aww... i hope that you get him
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haha i like your author comment, it makes me happy. its been a while since ive been around here, just checking up on how your writes are going, looks good im sure everything will end up as it should and youll find yourself happy with the way it does in the end. the poem is, well, i know youll hate this but....cute
hehe thanks kido
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awwwwww dis about pz uh uh uh WINK WINK LOL
very gd poem geeg well done i bagsie comp at dads hahahahaah
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Eyes are the windows to the soul... Or so I've been told. *grins*
I liked this, the beginning was more of a fantasy piece but once you got finished I was left with a more realistic impression.
btw, I suppose the last stanza is redundant in the two sentences: This is not supposed to be emo,
or a love letter...
*shrugs* I dunno. Anywho, good job!
Oxemity
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