Take these pieces and make me whole;
I’ll bring the super glue,
Just don’t let me fall in love
With you too soon.
Because under the mead moon
I know our song,
And the stars gossip
Mercury is coming and mars isn’t happy
But strangely enough—
Right feels right and
All the inadequacies have left
I am still fragile and tender
Cracked, broken, reassembling
Kind of still insecure
Take these pieces and make me
Feel alright,
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Written April 27th, 2006
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And the stars gossip
The stars gossip. That phrase, Wow, I never actually thought about something like that. If the stars could speak I wonder what they would say. I mean they would be able to see things that we couldn't. Since they're always above us. Ah! Sorry of topic. I adore the picture. Fits the poem. The Fae, if I may call her that, she seems at ease yet wanting to keep her distance. Sounds just like the girl in the poem. She isn't sure if she can love again but, inside her heart she knows she wants to. Time, it all just takes time. Let me know please where you get your pictures. I am big on Fantasy art and I was just wondering. -
again, i feel for ya!
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Any one that has had thier heart broken before, will appreciate this one. It says a lot in a short piece! Keep them coming.
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hands you ductape for broken hearts
hi kryspin
awww it's gorgeous poetry dearie. fragile and tender? yah describes me too and i liked how you talked about the stars and moon being your critics and almost your protectors. and a beautiful anime to go with it. take care and keep writing
gooday my friend
phil -
i like this, you did a kick ass job on it, i am a littel confused, but that's jsut me, keep it flowing
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im not sure about this its a bit abstract for me.
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