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Hard To Move On

Not wanting to let go
Dont wanna say goodbye
Yet wanting to move on
So many feelings to deny
Not wanting to forget
Still caught up in tha past
Hoping these feelings will change
Hoping these feelings will not last
Afraid to start all over
Afraid to move along
Knowing that these feelings cant last forever
Knowing these feelings are all wrong

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Written April 27th, 2006

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  • LaurenLightning--x
    April 27, 2006
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    I love that! I feel like your writting about me in that poem.. It's a very weird feeling. I really like the way it's set out as well. It's brilliant, well done!

  • Eusebius
    April 27, 2006
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    Bravo!

    Very deftly done poetry! I really liked it! Bravo! (Just a suggestion: I think it would enhance the poem if it were single spaced.)