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Would you like

Would you like
a glimpse into
my soul?

Its only for the
privleged few
the ones who really see
ME.

Not everyone knows
what lies beneath
my exterior.

However, you seem nice
until you stab me in
the back.

How could you?
You used me
manipulated me.

I trusted you with
my feelings trusted you
with my soul.

How wrong i was
to let you in,
a moment of
insanity.

Can I explain
in a different
way?

I have been
VIOLATED
I am not secure
with myself any longer.

You abused me
twisted your hate
around my heart
until it burst.

I have hope however,
that my soul
will repair.

And then,
when I least expect it,
I will let someone in again
and the walls will come down.



Author notes

I know this is weird, but poems
don't have to rhyme so im all good
and if you don't like it, I don't care.
Written April 27th, 2006

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  • DancingGypsy
    June 21, 2006
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    L-A-U-R-E-L!
    I
    Know
    Where
    You
    Live!!
    MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    Okay, I'm done...
    Verrrrrrrry good....
    Edited on Jun 21, 5:00 p.m. because ''.


  • laurel anne
    April 29, 2006
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    Thanks. Umm its not really true for me but i was inspired by my friend.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 27, 2006
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    I like it. Don't know if it is true life, but it has been for me. Well written.