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Happy birthday

HAPPY B-DAY AND YOU ARE YOUNG.
STILL HAVE LOTS TO DO WITH YOUR LIFE.
YOU MAY ONLY BE TURNING 28 BUT YOU ARE STILL YOUNG.
YOU ALWAYS BE YOUNG IN MY HEART.
NO BODY CAN TELL ME THAT YOUR OLD.
I KNOW YOU MAY FEEL THAT WAY BUT I AM HERE AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

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I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETHEART.
Written April 27th, 2006

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 13, 2006
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    i am a bit confused. this was entered as a prewrite into my contest. i have like three birthday contests and now it is not showing which one it is for. i think something has gone haywire. i am almost forty one. another contest is for someone who will be twenty two and the other has multiple people. viyanna rosemarie


  • wings of an angel
    April 29, 2006
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    Very nice write for Shahrzad


  • Starhiker
    April 28, 2006
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    Shahrzad will never be old, my friend, never... You'll never be old if you are young in your heart. Thank you for entering this contest. You have my applause, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Jim

  • Ir.muse
    April 27, 2006
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    My dear friend who said I felt old? lol...be sure I never feel old even if I turn to 100 years.

    Thank you for entering this contest.
    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad