Its a poem I wrote as an Ode of sorts to the movie Saw & Saw2! "Enjoy"
Why me, Why not him?
Why Separate me from my Limb?
Why cut me so deep that I bleed?
Why cut me from oxygen, let the paracites feed?
Why do this and not let us know?
Why not let your true face show?
Why so much pain just to teach a lesson?
Why let us leave with a bodypart missin'?
Why leave me for death as you leave me be?
Why cant you see what it's causing me?
Why leave me here in pain and alone?
Why force my character to be shown?
Why is it going dark, why cant I see?
F** it, I give up, Rather let my soul be free!
Author notes
As this is my first poem here HAVE MERCY!
Written April 26th, 2006
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Thank you all for the Constructive Criticism all good
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I sooo love to see those movies you've written about, but unfortunately my boyfriend doesn't like that kind of movies and since I don't like it to watch them all by myself, I haven't seen them
lol 
I love the way you captured these movies in this poem in fact well done!
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While I havent seen the films you mention, I am assuming they are horror films? Even without the benefit of seeing the movies, though, I think this poem is easy for a reader to attach their own meaning to it.
Thanks for sharing and welcome to AllPoetry.
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