Now...
I can feel the
compassion of raindrops,
And in the sun's grace
i can rejoice,
in the rainbow of
your love,
I have found the
colours of life...
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Dedicated to my darling. . .
Written April 27th, 2006
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very cute and touching. Nicely done. physical love is something and the love poem talks is different..very sublime
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3 Stars ***
Hey Aditi
s,
sorry for my late comment, but i am really happy to read your poem after a period of such a long time... good to see that you have started posting your poems again
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this is a lovely romantic poem..really it is, i hope the one for whom this poem is made has read this poem... ... its small.. but very lovely...
take cares and have anice time my dear sister... just keep it up.... your humble little friend..
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... ... - Vic ( who else?? )
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thankyou dear...nice...you liked it...
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I have simply loved the beauty of true pure emotions here -First and foremost it is a pleasure to see you write after so long a time- secondly you have not lost yr mastery with words ,rather if I may add you have only tempered it even better-third,your poem says it all-it's simplicity is heart touching
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Lovely!!!
Very beautiful and loving my dear girl. It is nice to see you back and writing . I guess exams are over and you are free at last. Hope to see more of your writes
Love and blessings from Coimbatore - Uncle - -
Goodness gracious…. thanks to your darling who’s prompted your muse to come out from hibernation with rainbow colours
…. It must be spring time
It’s beautiful and masterfully penned, simply wow …
mina
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8/10
I like this poem, it's very sweet and clear.
it's written well and i liked the choice of words, and the way you said: i can rejoice in the rainbow of your love. I really liked that part.
I think this is very well written and would give it a high score if i were scoring.
xxx
keep up the good work.
xx
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