Now that I've found you
I can see the horizon
all the sky, pure gold
nothing like a fools gold
Now that I have you
I believe that dreams can come true
I've slept for so long
but you opened my eyes
Now that I'm in your arms
you stand in front of all that is evil
feeling as warm and safe
Your my 911
Now that I'm with you
I can be myself
rare as it may feel
your always my inspiration
Now that I've standing next to you
The moment when darkness of sadness takes me
You smile
Then some how the light blinds my sorrow
Now that I have you
You end my night and day
I walk these borders
and swim these seas
But nothing will compare
not in all the treasure
nothing compares
to how you make me feel
Author notes
umm... this is kinda sappy! lol! i'm been abit like that lately! kinda need to edit! so don't make it your last read! lol xox 
Written April 27th, 2006
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Outstanding!!!
Hey champ!
this work was a crap piece of work and... I'm just kidden around.
I think this was a brilliant piece of work and it really spoke out to me. I truly understand the message given here and what your talking about. The score I would rate is about 20/5 it's that good. and is great folks, not great but grape. lol. never mined that all I really am inspired by this poem and I hope you can keep up your sprite. My secret is just relaxe when you write and just let if flow. BTY what sould my next poem be about, I mean topic/s and a name if you want. my newest poem's out it's called BACK FIRE!!! it's enteredin a contest and that is really where the magic begin's. Rapping it up, i loved your describtion's (bad spelling)and use of lines that just flow Eg.
I walk these borders
and swim these seas
keep up the good work and please give a new poem idea if you want but if you don't just tell me by the end of a week starting from today which is thursday the First of June.Oh yea one more thing. Make sure you put a verdict on other people's work. Don't feal bad about my last 3 or so messages have had verdicts. Any way have fun making more Champ and everyone I hope you keep up the good work. This poem was great, and is great folks not great but grape!!! lol Haggard you know at the invetion of the future contest. This is my longest message so far. Lots of love.
Cya later
Quad Cannon
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Churchy -
Thanks for the comment yea it does help alot! You gave me some more perspectives to look at and consider. Thanks. I love this poem it's GREAT I love it!
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I agree with the other people! This is so cute, and gorgeous, and yes, it may be sappy, but thats a good thing!
I am so glad that you are so happy! You so deserve it Charlie!! 
Em XoXo
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This is gorgeous Charlotte... Dunno what else to say,
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aww!! great work!!! "weenie" This is so sweet!! Im glad he makes you so happy!!!
cya!!
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nice write . . . sweet. - CJM
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