Is that you or your wicked twin?
Odour of sanctity, musk of sin?
Is damnation why you beckon me in
Or salvation? Well, let’s begin…
Or deviation – the moves you’re tryin’?
Such temptation – are you lyin’?
…Say
Baby will you dance with me?
Make more than romance with me,
Move closer with your glowing body,
Skin-to-skin you gotta move with me…
Are you the taste of red hot chilli,
Or the coolness of the calla lily?
Let’s make love willy-nilly…
Come to me, come with me, thrill me.
Sex is a drug, so cure me or kill me.
Do it freely, just don’t bill me.
…Say
Baby will you dance with me?
Make more than romance with me,
Move closer with your glowing body,
Skin-to-skin you gotta move with me…
I could die for that look in your eyes,
Live, but only between your thighs,
Take you just to hear your sighs,
Finding where your g-spot lies,
Binding you with silken ties.
Don’t care if we’re foolish or wise.
I sink or swim, you fall or rise.
…Say
Baby will you dance with me?
Make more than romance with me,
Move closer with your glowing body,
Skin-to-skin you gotta move with me…
Is this heaven or hell? I don’t know –
Must be the heaven where wicked people go
Or the hell for good people, you know…
Author notes
Go here to hear this read aloud by AP's brilliant young rap poet Daniel Fawzi Abo (to whom go my heartfelt and unreserved thanks) homepage.ntlworld.com/danabouk/ForMB.mp3 - [LINK DOWN, DO NOT CLICK] at present this is just a voice-only mp3, but Daniel has offered to put in a music track as soon as he can. The link will remain the same.
Written April 27th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Darkened Longings *INVITATION ONLY * by Sylvyrwyng.
300 points, ended May 19, 2006, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A side of my dear Faerie Princess I don't often see! {shocked}
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Is phat you dear
jump on over here
get jiggy my lady
whack out the shady.
Smoosh -
You're Australian - you've had plenty of practice!
(only kidding, Bazza 
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Erotically presented
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Tangle, I don't own you. You'd know about it if I did, laddie! Glad you like the poem.
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Excellent
The voice really brought this right out of the computer's silence. A very HOT & erotic song makes me want to dim the lights.
Your barm-pot,
Tangle -
Sylv - just wait until he puts it to music - he has a quirky, compelling style of delivery which I love.
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Applause! Applause! Applause! Applause! Applause! Applause! Applause!
I hate rap music but with lyrics like this one, that could change very quickly! LOL...Congrats, this is the first time that I have ever had lyrics in my contest! HEHEHEHEH... I like it alot and am going to try and get to listen to the sound recording soon. Thank you sweety! -
Recorded, just trying to find a decent instrumental
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Daniel you are the best!
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Love it! I'm going to record this now. (you logged off before I could ask you any questions
) So I'll just record as I see fit. I'll post the link here so other people can get to it if you don't log back in soon.
Dan. -
Jings you were quick onto this one, Melodies! Thanks for the praise and the good wishes.
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A stunner full of thunder! Shakes the ground for miles around! You have a beauty here! Looks like a party that will bring in a crowd! Good for you to get it in the contest..and good luck!
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