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Love Sick

Trapped under its spell and can't get out
Locked up into deep, sensual feelings that I have to shout
Bottled up his potion of love, barely standing a lick
No doctor or hospital has a cure for this type of sick

Surrounded by its rings and whirling feelings
Something I never felt before and gets a once broken heart to healing
Driven into the passion and wanting to be his desire
Pulled deeply by angels into a lovers lake of fire

Swept off my feet by the words that he speak
Desperately waiting for him and hoping not to become to weak
Repeating the feelings that were once shared by Romeo and Juliet
Still wondering were these suppose to happen when we first met

Racing towards you to make sure everything is fine
Feeling the blessing of thanks for making you mine
A good feeling of sick sick from being in love
Knowing that your the only one that I can think of

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Written April 26th, 2006

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  • OneAndOnlyRay
    April 26, 2006
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    Thanks J! Read my other poem to its called Heavy Rain!


  • DarkFire-J
    April 26, 2006
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    That was so beautiful OneAndOnlyRay




    love you and i'm so proude of you!!
    Edited on Apr 26, 10:00 p.m. because ''.