I love you before I've held you,
You capture all my hopes and dreams.
I wish the best life has to offer,
And each night I'm on my knees
Begging God to make you healthy
To make you loving and wise.
For you are all the world to me,
Everything in this mother's eyes.
Just know that you are truly loved,
And know that you are mine.
I will give you everything
Until the end of time.
Author notes
This is written for my unborn child, who has already captured my heart, hopes, and dreams...I love you!
Written April 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dreams by peru.
300 points, ended May 1, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Oh my gosh!
Aww! This was extremely sweet and heart warming! Very touching
and, last but not least, congratulations
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Wow i didnt know you were pregnant. Or maybe this is not even a real child but a soon to be child. Anyway you can see the real love you have for it. You are such an amazing perso
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Keep On Writing!
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This really is unparallelled love, beyond the spacial exteriors we call our world, you hit a fantastic, unique episode between baby and mother. Beautiful,
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What a sweet and loving dedication! This is a wonderful gift to be able to give to someone, to enrich their lives as they make their way through the confusing times of growing up. And such a cute picture with it's little finger on it's nose!
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aww this one gave me goosebumps! it is so increadably sweet. I love children so much and I love that time when I bonded with my children before they were born. This is such a preciouse read and I hope you win the contest because this one takes the cake! and most importantly CONGRADULATIONS HUN!
huggles
~Lena -
AWWWW that is soo cute. Are you pregnant. and if you are how come you did not tell me. I wan to be the god mother. lol.
Such a cute poem.
Rose -
HAppy mother's day yesterday (since you are already a mother, just chekc your tummy
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This was a beautiful piece and it was so sweet to your baby...
I know all will turn out alright...
-Pinky -
wow, this is a wonderful poem you wrote here, i mean wow, this is good. i love this one and i know your child will, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is so incredibly sweet and loving..I remember that feeling of love that took over me while I was pregnant.. there is nothing like it. Your description was lovely. Thank you for sharing such a touching piece.. very fitting for today as well..
~Kristy -
I have felt exactly this way before...a few times... Nice job at capturing the feelings...Trina.
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WOW! SWEET! Awesome! I'm so excited for you! I would love to have a baby, but I think maybe I shoudl marry first and get a little older. lol.
~cookie -
Congratulations
Merry meet,
Congratulations on winning the Bronze. This is a very lovely poem. there isn't anything I could find to really critique. I hope you child is born healthy. Again, Congratulations.
and one for your unborn
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Good Writing
Wow! A man can't identify with this, just sit back and admire! --Ellis
Yes, I understand. GREAT POEM. --Tiki Cat
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