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forgiving you.

how can i forgive you
why should i
the things you spoke to me
cut deeper then knives
the rose i held for you
slipped and shattered
it cant be pieced together again
is there any reason to
i wont take your S***
i don't need this
u were never my friend
so why should i forgive you
when you're forsaken
so cruel and uncontrollable
so misunderstanding
so damaging
i dont need you
F*** you
youre not forgivend

Author notes

its to my ex lead singer, she said some really messed up things to me and my bass player..so ya im pissed off right now
Written April 26th, 2006

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  • rockerpunk666
    June 8, 2006
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    So who was this one too??? I hope it wasent about me.


  • sleeves for summer
    April 26, 2006
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    Emotions are running high on this one, wonderful.


  • Rockergin
    April 26, 2006
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    lol nice nah i wasnt reading what u wrote i was wondering y steph kept lookin at you

  • I am The Sic
    April 26, 2006
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    really nice work on this you could really feel the intense emotion without knowing the situation really gives ya goose bumps ya know well I dun know why you're reading this when at this exact moment that I'm writing this you keep glancing over to read what I'm writing