Blossom at the window, silent night,
leaves making love with springtime breeze
asking me to follow it's green dance
and to follow fancy moon's light.
It was so calm and right time for flight,
flowers soft smell want to appease
my silly heart asking for romance,
I need your open arms tonight.
I want back my dreams, my real delight,
I want back my life no reprise,
no more illusion on empty glance,
I want you close to hug you tight.
Blossom at the window, silent night,
leaves making love with springtime breeze
asking me to follow it's green dance
and to follow fancy moon's light.
Author notes
Laura Lamarca new form:
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Written April 26th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Host Contests- The Wind by Just Listen.
500 points, ended May 18, 2006, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well done with this mum
It truly deserved this Gold. This is a hard disciplined form to follow and you made it look easy. Woot! My mum won Gold dances round the room with joy Go mum! Love you millions and always. 
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Thank you Sam. Yes, you are right. Sometimes some things pop up with my emotions, coming out from the past.
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This is very touching. Such a soulful, intimate, hauntingly beatiful write from you this time. I feel the words. You have put so much emotion into this. The seeking, searching, yearning tone gives me a sense of the loss that you feel for something that has been taken from you. This is an exquisitly sensual and sensative piece.
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Thank you Linda for your always kind words and great support.
~Sonja~ -
Dear Princess, your words are always like a balm on my soul. Thank you.
~Sonja~ -
Yes, this form was a great challenge and counting syllables was like a night mare to me
Next time you will have to start special class for all of us. If you will continue with this kind of forms I'll be back to my free verses...
~Sonja~ -
very pretty poem here thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest..Linda
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This is a very good first attempt at a La'Tuin, it's actually quite a hard form. This has beautiful imageries filled with gentle expression, a true pleasure to read. Well done mum Love you millions and always. Laura
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A beautiful piece my dear queen.
Wish you the best luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Thanks Kevin. Maybe it was something with Moon, or something with my heart, but, here we are, verses came out.
~Sonja~ -
VERY BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND
Ah, so beautiful dear friend, it does touch ones heart so gently and sweetly.
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