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When is it easy?

The road is bumpy
With rocks and holes everywhere
Ice is always smooth

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Written April 26th, 2006

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  • Gypsy-at-Heart
    February 7, 2007

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    Great piece. You've conveyed a beautifully simple message in the traditional haiku form I was taught when I was little (5-7-5 syllable count) and I think it is the simplicity that not only makes haikus a beautiful form, but brings this one out. Your first line states a great truth, in answer to the title and this is followed up with the image in the second line of this road. The final line I think works perfectly as a contrast.

    Really love this piece.


  • sanmdr
    April 27, 2006
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    good write.. in plain words .. with good flow..