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lavender covered whore

The smell of smoke covered by the cheap fragrance of lavender...

walking down the crowded halls seeings faces smeared past the walls
i hold my books and walk face down...

the smell of smoke covering my face, the smell of lavender following soon after, i shake it off and keep walking faster.

Cheap. She sold herself so cheap. she is nothing more than a lavender covered whore...

the words enter my mind and stay longer than i wish...

Cheap i say to myself... i will never be like her...

the smell of smoke covered by the cheap fragrance of lavender...

i keep walking down the crowded halls... Faces become more distinct now, i can think clear now...

Cheap, but sold... gone and out of my life... nothing  more than a lavender covered whore...

♥ Samanatha Ann♥Marie

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Written April 26th, 2006

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  • William Gray
    May 4, 2006
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    hey i reallly liked this poem... it was different from most of the poetry on this site, not depressing and not a stupid attempt at comedy, but ultimatly interesting. Its not really any display of emotion at all but more of a desperate desire to create your destiney and not be trapped in the life that was plannedd for you. great job with this... i hope to read more
    ~William/Allys